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Where I want to be in 2015

In 2015 I’ll be the proud owner of one of the most profitable renewable energy companies in california.

Education is the key to my success and with my basic knowledge along with the renewable energy training I get from Laney will get me there .

Once I graduate I’ll get a job installing solar panels for a company to get experience and familiar with the labor part of the business.

And after a year or two I’ll go back to Laney for the business part of the renewable energy industry while I’m still installing solar pannels.

And once I graduate from the business course I’ll quit the installer job and become their competition.

And that move will start my life as a businessman, and securing my families future. Also I’ll be able to send my kids to college and start taking  my wife on vacations around the world. and overall we will live a comfortable life.

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